Archive for November, 2014

FAST Sonnets in Cyberspace #5

11/30/2014

“Shot through the heart” — are You to blame? (Who gives
Love a bad name?) Oh human heart Maker,
When my heart aches, let it be … because lives
In me living Sword, the dark heart-Breaker …
Because Your arrow pierces wounded chest.
But You fired at me? How could you betray
So heartlessly, like sewer-lover? Oh, quest
Of ages, test of sages — and belay
Rope threads (as knee-jerk heart rages) into
Scarred soul-jest heart on harpoon of heaven.
Love-Slayer, help me pull Your sure shaft through.
(When Your heart breaks, “no, it don’t break even.”)
   Rappel, please, down Your arrow-toting rope —
   Tie me and my pain to Your heartache hope.

© Bruce William Deckert 2014

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NOTES — POETRY 411
The first stanza begins with a song lyric from Bon Jovi, and the last stanza ends with a song lyric from The Script. The sonnet addresses — and attempts to reconcile — some song lyrics from the Scriptures:

“Your arrows have pierced me, and your hand has come down on me.” — Psalm 38: 2

“He drew his bow and made me the target for his arrows. He pierced my heart with arrows from his quiver.” — Lamentations 3: 12-13

“The arrows of the Almighty are in me.” — Job 6: 4

This is a Shakespearean (or English) sonnet — a 14-line poem with 10 syllables per line, comprised of three stanzas (of four lines each) plus a closing couplet. The rhyme scheme — the pattern of rhymes at the end of each line — is as follows: abab cdcd efef gg.

For today’s time-challenged reader, the sonnet might be the best poem structure: 14 brief and (ideally) power-packed lines.

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